On Detachment Poem by ritty patnaik

On Detachment

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if we are not greedy,
we cannot sip the nectar
to the brim,
which will only make us
detached
for final destination.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rakesh Bedi 09 July 2009

A nice thought but contradictory in itself!

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Saadat Tahir 09 July 2009

but ritty...what ever will measure or tell when its done....is it inbuilt...inherent to the homosapiens....shall we delve the scriptures....will it be braodcast on a loudspeaker at a million mad concert....conundrums...questions got me going wild there fantastic write and ten cheers

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