On A Snowy Sunday Poem by PRIYANKA BHANDARKAR

On A Snowy Sunday



Tiny droplets of water on the window pane
a unique making, silent steps of glory
a billion feathers that hath hatched
one little room, the intellect decided on a holiday
the beautiful moments of nurture, a frenzy looking boat
that sight of victory, white and white
it lay there itself.a success in work
the art of fiction, the idea of nothingness

an idle memory, desires and hopes
the snowman is lovable
mending walls of the neighbors
a matter, mind and money
this masquerade of massacre
this snow is only a women.

the rest a holiday, our forefathers and traditions
the hope of light, a prayer
one needs to be simple.

the sun on the sublime when the day is done.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 13 March 2014

Your thoughts are good, imagery great, but I have a hard time reading it, because sentences run together and don't make sense that way. Maybe try reading books in English, and noticing the punctuation, especially ending sentences before going onto the next one. Look forward to reading more of your poetry. RoseAnn

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Priyanka Bhandarkar 10 November 2016

Here I am talking about a snowman build by children.!

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