Old Trees (Haiku) Poem by Jesus Diaz Llorico

Old Trees (Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


The old darkened trees
struggling to keep pace with life
pain hidden in winds

Tuesday, October 20, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abdulrazak Aralimatti 21 October 2015

Verily, a good similitude.....10

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Sj Holland 20 October 2015

Great imagery! Love the personification.

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Liza Sudina 20 October 2015

never felt compassion for a tree! you are more sensitive! Nice!

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