Old Rusted Truck Poem by David McLansky

Old Rusted Truck

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He sat in his old rusting truck
Feeling his age, and out of luck;
To his daughter-in-law
An impossible burden
No longer allowed
To get a word in;
The revolver that he got
In the Korean war
Lay on the seat beside him;
This knobby hill
Such a tranquil spot
To shoot himself and die in;
He lit his final cigarette
And sucked the rich smoke down
An old man who had few regrets
With no purpose to hang around ?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elaine Sept 07 December 2013

So thought filled David. With my luck my horn will get stuck!

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We are destined to be old rusty trucks After a million miles on life's highway Obsolete models with no fuel or luck Just eyesores with wheels and tons of rust........ Great poem Sir and welcome to my page too

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