Old Photo Poem by Silentpoet Grl

Old Photo

Rating: 5.0


letting go of the old faded photo
it falls to the ground,
glass shattering in its frame
the old photo buried in brokenness
a once happy moment it captured
has soon become a faded, distant memory
leaving it laying broken on the ground
I walk away from the shattered, torn pieces
just as you did to me,
left me broken and shattered.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin East 09 December 2011

So true. old cards and photos reminders of something lost but never forgotten. Lovely

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Cosmic Dreamer 30 October 2011

Emotions spilled upon the page in the form of words have painted pictures in the mind of a dreamer... Another very powerful poem... Well done...

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Unwritten Soul 23 October 2011

Cling..........That was awesome, i love the idea and structure..and the end just perfect, so emotional and i can feel the brokenness....be ware dont keep the glass, it will make you bleed... :) _Nice penned_Unwritten Soul

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Vipins Puthooran 22 October 2011

I understand that pain, , you written here it well.. A beautiful poem..

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Emma Zawadi Awich 20 October 2011

it has a gud concept but try to make it more profound so others can understand the pain

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