Old Marriage Style Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Old Marriage Style

Rating: 4.8


Unwillingly ushered in a house unknown,
Saw a young lady keeping head down,
White complexioned girl with eyes brown,
Almost frozen but expressions not frown,

I was at pained to learn orthodox way,
Children still not allowed having a say,
Uncertainty more and prediction less,
What is in store only assumptions and guess?

With great courage one may ask “hello”
Limited conversation and tradition to follow,
Parents present and limited talks,
Accompany to little distance with few step walks;

I am your would be companion,
Running a shop but not a champion,
Will allow freedom that you need,
No dowry, nothing or any more greed,

“Will you marry me” simply I ask,
Rush blood on face but hide in mask,
Wait for an answer and okay the proposal,
Parents too were ready for quick disposal,

Quick come yes as no competition,
answer ready even without question,
so stage is ready for lovely meet,
parent happy and exchange greet,

Day for final count down almost arrive,
simple way to wed and not to connive,
It’s way of life and norms to follow,
promise made doesn’t seem hollow

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chaul Vania 11 August 2009

marriage is important....10

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Santoksingh Jadeja 13 August 2009

somany still prefer old style....10

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Vinod Karmakar 13 August 2009

people still love it....10

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Kamli Kamal 16 August 2009

it is mariage that matters...10

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Saroj Davde 18 August 2009

style i sstyle old or new...10

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Ketan Rajgor 22 October 2009

I was at pained to learn orthodox way, Children still not allowed having a say, Uncertainty more and prediction less,

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Poonam Suthar 21 October 2009

Unwillingly ushered in a house unknown, Saw a young lady keeping head down, White complexioned girl with eyes brown

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Ramdulari Sinha 18 October 2009

White complexioned girl with eyes brown, Almost frozen but expressions not frown,

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Sita Kesri 18 October 2009

am your would be companion, Running a shop but not a champion, Will allow freedom that you need

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 18 September 2009

nice indian tradition is portrayed here. well done

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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