Old Den Poem by sekharan pookkat

Old Den

Rating: 4.5


Coal filled with shawl
In an empty heart
Dreams ignited again.

Clouds quenched
Under the sky
And raindrops bagged.

Show me the colors
Of wonderful dreams
And paint my pictures.

Surprises wrapped
My thoughts around
The old den again.

Saturday, July 4, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: memories
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
when surprises turned into memories I recollect the old days which is still flourishes ever green in my mind.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 05 July 2015

Surprises spark old memories and fill the heart with dreams. Nice penning.Thanks for sharing.

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Impressive imaescaping and pristine structural fluxion...Your choice of employing the use of short, crisp, tight linage enable this succinct yet compendious work to glide as smoothly as a brand new coin tossed across a freshly glaced ice pond...Solid Crafting, S.P! ....... ~FjR~

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Sekharan Pookkat 05 July 2015

Thank you Frank James Ryan- A perfect repatriate for an imaginary execution beyond words

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