Oh What A Mess On My Desk. Poem by kirilee S..

Oh What A Mess On My Desk.

Rating: 5.0


what i found on my desk
was nothing to be impressed:
A ripe peach with a ugly bruise,
a pair of stinky tennis shoes,
a day-old ham-and-cheese with blue food dye,
a swimsuit that I left to dry,
a pencil that glows in the dark,
some bubble gum found in the park,
a paper bag with cookie crumbs,
an old kazoo that barely hums,
a spelling test I almost failed,
a letter that I should have mailed,
and one more thing, I must confess,
a note from my mother: Clean This mess! ! ! !

i copyed the first 4 lines.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ana Monnar 13 September 2007

LOL your poem is hilarious. You sound like Dr. Seuss. This would make an excellent illustrated book for children. There is an illustrator that could capture your words and exagerate them. Fantastic job! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! A big 10.

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