Oh Valentine, Valentine Poem by Keli'i Rice

Oh Valentine, Valentine

Rating: 4.3


Oh Valentine, Valentine! Won't you be mine?
Words called out to my one so divine
If the feeling is mutual then let heart intertwine
Oh Valentine, Valentine! I'll never find

Oh Valentine, Valentine! I'm lost in the lust
One look and I'm trembling, afraid and nervous
With hope that an angel will help from above
Oh Valentine, Valentine! A one sided love

Oh Valentine, Valentine! Won't you be mine?
On this one day of yearning, when souls intertwine
My brittle heart breaks upon words of decline
Oh Valentine, Valentine! You'll never be mine

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prabir Gayen 13 February 2019

Beautiful poem on valentine...congrats dear poet... love

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Mahtab Bangalee 13 February 2019

beautiful poem// but O O Valentine You are only MINE!

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Adrian Flett 13 February 2019

I like the rhythm in this poem and the way love is sort but not found.

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 February 2019

Oh Valentine, Valentine! I'm lost in the One look and I'm trembling, afraid and nervous With hope that an angel will help from above.. love and, desire, passion, romance. a nice poem indeed. tony

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O! Yes that unrequited love.Idolizing someone who can never love back.But there is always the hope! ..Love forever.. a ten

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Khairul Ahsan 13 February 2019

'On this one day of yearning, when souls intertwine' - really?

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Amir Marandi 13 February 2019

Such a beautiful and sad poem. I " hope that an angel will help from above" help you in this difficult time and protect you from the " brittle heart breaks" . I feel your pain. Thanks for sharing.

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Kelly Kurt 13 February 2019

Seven years ago, this person submitted 2 juvenile poems. Just saying.

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Aqua Flower 13 February 2019

Lovely simply lovely just in time for Valentine's Day. O cupid won't you just come and stay awhile to make me smile. The rhyme scheme in this poem is excellent really really wonderful poem for the day! Congratulations

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Susheela Shiju 13 February 2019

oh my! I loved this piece of work! added this to My Poemlist! ! hearty congrats dear for being selected as the POD! ! 10++++

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