Oh My Love Poem by Dave Alan Walker
Oh My Love
Oh my love
I see you so near
But our love
Can never be
Our worlds can never meet
They will never let us be
The culture of yours
The evil of mine
The colour of your skin
The pailness of mine
Should not matter
In the love of two minds
God let us be
To love who we love
Can't you see
It was meant to be
All we ask
Is to be left in peace
But I guess we know
That will never be
Why can't they see
How I love you
They said you was dead
That you laid down and died
Oh my love
Why did you die
Can't you see
I can't be without you
I miss your smile
Your sweet sweet smile
Oh god why
Did you let my love die
I lie down and die
Look up to the sky
And see my love waiting
God let us be
To love who we love
Can't you see
It was meant to be
Very well drafted scenaries so serene of unrequited love and a spin a yearn attitude of love is felt within.Love is like a horse here which you can ride until the end of the riverbed but perhaps nobody can make the horse drink water.Its upto the horse then to decide. Your poetry is truly overwhelming Sir and thanks for sharing it with rookies like me.Impeccable write..
Forbidden love, the theme of many centuries, and a reoccurring phrase in beautiful poems, like this one.
A very good poem exposing one negative effect of racism. Very natural, passionate and high degree of sandness. Very good. BRAVOOOOO......!
'God let us be To love who we love Can't you see It was meant to be '...like that!
This is Great, crappy times of segregation it seems of two people, sorry my friend.. Good Write..
Very good love. I reguest you to read my new poems and comments and rate. Thanks.
Dave Walker Excellent Love poem, Dave...short and sweet love poem. I just love it....so meaningful love and sad message.
great poem my friend! ! ! ! 'i can't be without you' those words, , , , ,
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Good job, keep up the good work. 'can't you see, it was meant to be' But maybe that's what our dreams are fore.