Oh My Lord Poem by darkness reigns

Oh My Lord



On this bed
I bleed
Never living
Never breathing
Never dead
Oh my lord I said
Which poison did I thou take?
On this bed
I never breath
Never dead
Oh my lord I thou said!
With these lies I tear and grind
Ahahahahahha!
With these sticks and stones I shatter your bones
Ahahahahahha!
(claps)
On this bed
I bleed
Never living
Never breathing
Never dead
Oh my lord.... I said....

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Again timed to earthquake tinie tempah noisia remix
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ebi Robert 14 May 2012

Line 7 says ' which poison did I thou take? I thought this was a mistake not until i saw line 11 say ' oh my lord I thou said'. I can't imagine it right for these pronouns I AND THOU walking together in these lines! What is the brain behind this? I am asking because perphaps the poet would know better! But that dispite that, this is a nice write

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Unwritten Soul 12 May 2012

Hmm that we call sleeping, you are flying in the dream not in earth not yet in heaven so go anywhere you want, once your soul back to your body bring back all spirit in you and wake up to live in real life, nice write friend_Unwritten Soul

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