Oh My Dear Daughter Poem by Bharati Nayak

I would love to see you as a candle dispelling darkness- and the flame may be flamed in your heart to flame in the heart of millions- good penning Bharati Nayak

I would love to see you as a candle dispelling darkness- and the flame may be flamed in your heart to flame in the heart of millions- good penning

Great motivating advising poem to yor daughter that all mommies would find inspiring and useful! Kudos fellow indian poetess.

An endearing poem dear poetess. Lovely expression... loved it

I would love to see you Stand for the truth And save every creature in distress I would love to see you Shine in your souI With kindness..........impressive expression with nice theme. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks.

What a beautiful poem, made up of a parent's wishes that her child's life is richly fulfilling, that the things which characterize it are things of moral value and not materialistic stuff. Which makes me read your poem as a prayer to some higher entity that listens to our expressions of love for others.. Your voice in this poem is so calm and focused, there's no nervous demands, just a quiet but deep joy in your daughter. This is the double effect of poetry: by expressing your feelings so vividly you evoke the same feelings in us.

I would love to see you as a candle dispelling darkness! Care for your daughter. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

very nice poem. Being a mother of a daughter myself, I completely agree with you on this...