Oh Mine Papa Poem by Ken e Hall

Oh Mine Papa

Rating: 5.0


I know how important the emotional bond between father and child is,
So so important in the child’s journey in life with dad.
To receive the Shaping of personality,
the forming strength in character, the love for family,
all these things including teaching the power of Gods love.
The awesome awesomeness a young boy sees in the huge hands of his dad
and the security he finds when he nestles into them.
His football coach, fishing mentor and most important of all the
tower of strength that stands tall in the home and is not afraid to show all his
love to mum and all his children. Who am I to shout out loud to know all these things?
For a life time they were all in my head.
Let’s just look in my early boyhood diaries—many years ago and see.

“Hello Robin I thought your new bike had a broken chain, ”
“Aw my dad fixed it last night, he can fix anything, ”
Wow he’s his umbrella in the pouring rain
Why do I feel tummy pain?

“Hello Susie under the old oak tree I love your rope swing, ”
“Pa fixed it last night, now with birds I can fly and whistle and sing”
Why do I feel so jealous for such a wonderful thing?

Oh there is Billy’s pa throwing him high in the air,
Strong and firm and catching him, strength with flair
Why do I feel it all seems so unfair?

Why you might ask a five year old boy clutching his toy,
Who saw all the commotion as mum called in vain?
As my dad opened the door and left
And we never ever
Saw him again.
Nevertheless
Happy Fathers Day xxx

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patrick A. Martin 17 July 2009

Ken my dad was around but he was a fall down drunk and may as well have been somewhere else A Fond Farewell was deicated to him not about him. Paddy I voted this work a ten. Like you, I wish my dad had been an umbrella or shield my sisters married violent alcoholics and he never protected me from them.

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Marieta Maglas 08 July 2009

the essential expression is' here: ''all these things including teaching the power of Gods love.'' nice narrative poem..10++

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Sandra Fowler 06 April 2009

An eloquent write. But it is your last lines that really resonate. Very poignant and revealing. That little boy who lost his father will never leave the landscapes of your mind.10, of course. Kind regards, Sandra

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