Oh Lovers Poem by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

Oh Lovers

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Oh lovers
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Be in clover
Down there, lying around in the sun
Forgetting troubles and tumults
Trials and tribulations
Struggles and wrangles
Pangs and fears
Of exultation how fair
But of eternity, must be fair……….

Saturday, July 19, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pradip Chattopadhyay 23 July 2014

a well crafted delightful poem.

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Our focus on eternity can transport our of our temporary pained reality. Well done my friend!

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V P Mahur 20 July 2014

Dear poet, Nice enthusiasm in your poem. Thanks for your lovely appreciation of my poem.

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Salini Nair 20 July 2014

some words for lovers, nice.................

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