Oh! Love Poem by enoch desewu

Oh! Love

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The wound is still fresh.
I wonder if it will ever heal.
Things were so cool and on an even keel.
What happened to our dreams?
My eyes are already stream with tears.
I know not your schemes.
I shouldn't have gone to the extremes.
So tight were we like a team.
Everything looks so gleam.
No longer can I see our seam.
Just as am about to get up more steam,
Things turn out to be like a stream.
What I know is love sucks,
and it shucks.
Too bad I gave all attention.
Always assure me of her affection.
No longer see any redemption.
All I can see is just a good old suspension.
Don't want to be put in a state of declension.
Look too good to deserve this indigestion.

Thursday, April 12, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 18 August 2013

a good write on love sucks sometimes it really does. no doubt about that but then if the right two people meet it can be a beautiful experience. just depends on the people. enjoyed

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