Oh Life Poem by Habibu Sule

Oh Life

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Why did you treat me this way
why did you deny your client

you said never
when my mind was reading ever
you have clenched me to the ground
Instead of raising me to the top

Oh life
Why did you put me at the negative side
Dislocating my vision
downgrading my status

You made me heartless
Because am speechless
Mindless, helpless and hopeless.

Saturday, September 24, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: autobiography
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Habibu Sule 13 October 2016

Thanks for the comment, Chinedu Dike.

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Chinedu Dike 24 September 2016

An insightful depiction of life that is bound to cruel fate - the absence of sunshine in deplorable condition of life at its lowest ebb. A well articulated piece of poetry, nicely brought forth with conviction. Thanks for sharing Habibu. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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