Oh! Heaven Poem by Mubeen Sadhika
Oh! Heaven
The venom of that
stunning snake
sour taste of acid
those drowsy pills
deadly speeding truck
roaring sea waves
anything would have
brought me here
the luxuriant dreamy
zone plush with exuberance
the purple trees
foiled fruits
honey spitting
coiled serpents
consummation stopped
senses blocked
negations never
could be witnessed
unforgettable
smell of poison
indelible shade
of damn hell
would complete
this fairyland.
Heaven can wait for recalcitrants with remorseful thought.
You write like me in short lines in simple English. I like your style very much.
simple words makes the poem easy to read and make it enjoyable and beautiful...thanks for sharing and keep writing..
I read this piece as profoundly ironic. I interpret your 'heaven' is that state of mind, temporary and unattainable after the first few 'hits' that is expressed so superbly in the Beetles 'Lucy in the Sky with Diamonds'. In this context, it works superbly for me. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
I don't this is nice. I believe this is astoundingly nice. Great work, Mubeen.
this poem is very nice.... the words are too simple but powerfull meaning... I really liked this poem. :)
a wondrfully written poem...going to heaven even is painful well said in first stanza...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Astonishing words came out from the fairyland! Very neat and clean and beautiful! I lovvvvvvv it! 10+