# Oh God Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# Oh God

Rating: 3.0


oh god
give me the leisure
or the pleasure
to lead this life
like the sun or the moon
they appear
as fresh as a babe
as if newly born....
every other day
they tread their paths
without a complain
ever learning....
they do not seem to be aging
oh god....
leisure and pleasure
like them...let it be mine
amidst a world
compassing duty in hand

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 10 June 2010

Fine concept on life where we shouldn’t complain…a lesion for all human being… 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Krishnarasa Seshadri 17 March 2010

Sweet, sir! reminds me of 'What is this life, so full of care! '!

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