Oh! Flower, I Feel Sorry For You! ! ! Poem by AISWARYA T ANISH

Oh! Flower, I Feel Sorry For You! ! !

Rating: 4.3


I saw a nice little flower…
Enjoying herself in the nice warm fields…
The place felt fine, what a beautiful sight! !
Why didn't it come yesterday? !
But the joy didn't last long enough…what a pity!
‘Cause the flower was plucked away! ! !
It was no longer there
So was the beauty
How gloomy the place felt now for sight! !
Why do flowers bloom, if it has to be murdered this way? ?
Still, they bloom, though they die so prematurely…
But to beautify the Earth! !
Why do we hurt these little things, who give us joy? ?
They are the ones who blooms happiness to the world
Aren't we too bound to be blossomed into flowers of happiness? ? ?
Oh Flower! ! I feel sorry for you! !
Can you be born again? ?
If I could, I would've fixed you into yourself again
But powerless I am…powerless except for eyes that are blind, but see evil thoughts
Why doesn't man think before his acts? ?
Why doesn't he care about his fellow creatures? ? ?

2006

(Do you think before you act? Such as, when you pick a flower? Do you enjoy the beauty and DO YOU throw it away in the trash? Do you ever think of other people who may also enjoy the beauty?)

© Copyright Aiswarya T Anish, Kerala, India

Oh!  Flower, I Feel Sorry For You! ! !
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subbaraman N V 09 March 2009

Great write! Great feelings! Great sensitivity! But that is the Divine will! ! !

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Merna Ibrahim 14 November 2010

Through these simple lines, you are discussing an important case and sending an important message..I hope people would think before doing anything! ! .God bless you dear :) 10++

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Ronald Speight 08 March 2009

its beautiful and in a creative mind one can think that the flower can represent all forms of life on this world even people

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Salu Salu 06 March 2009

Aiswarya, it's nice feeling reading your poem..n seeing you placed at 229/500... great...keep it up. lamentation is transmited well.........rgrds/salu

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Caterpillar MC 28 April 2009

A very meaningful poem.....simple words, great thought....

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Sethu 09 April 2018

So good Aiswarya

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Dr Antony Theodore 11 December 2017

Why do we hurt these little things, who give us joy? ? They are the ones who blooms happiness to the world Aren’t we too bound to be blossomed into flowers of happiness? ? ? beautiful dear poetess. so young as you are, you lift up your mind into the world lofty thoughts........ how true are your words..... beauty is God... tony

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chakkachula 16 November 2017

Sreebhoovilasthira angottu english aakiyo?

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Sangeetha Biju 23 June 2011

Nice one, Aiswarya! Keep up the good work!

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Haa pushpame...athika tunga padathiletra shobhichirunnatayi rajni kanakkaye nee Sreebhoovilasthira asamshayaminnu ninteyabhootiyengu punarengu kidappitorthaal

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KARUNAGAPPALLY, MANGALAM, KERALA, INDIA
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