Oh, Father! - Feel My Untold Love! (Part-2) Poem by Harindhar Reddy

Oh, Father! - Feel My Untold Love! (Part-2)

Rating: 4.8


When I think of all the things you GAVE me:
Your sacrifices in food; love and affection are some to name,
The list goes endless and I fail to count what you gave to me;
With your heart, your mind, your energy and your soul of fame!
Mother, oh mother, I am still your little son!
Father, Oh father, I love thee till I am done!

You burnt yourself like a CANDLE to give me light....
Your deeds are never dull; your love is never pale;
I count endless things you, an endless tale
All these you spent on me throughout the years.
Mother, oh mother, I am still your little son!
Father, Oh father, I love thee till I am done!

Now I am in foreign land tormented like an alien, I'm hurt!
I am sad yet I remember Rudyard Kipling's poem, 'If' –
There a father suggest 180 things to his son; What if?
I am not with you; yet your advices ring in heart!
Mother, oh mother, I am still your little son!
Father, Oh father, I love thee till I am done!

I cherish our relationship forever and a day,
Till earth exists and sun sparkles in every way,
Till Stars twinkle and moon delights I carry your name,
Till death may do us apart yet I carry all the same
Mother, oh mother, I am still your little son!
Father, Oh father, I love thee till I am done!

We are separated by boundaries narrow.....
Yet in my memories, I'm with as your shadow;
I may carry your fortunes for while.....
Yet I carry your hope for a mile;
Mother, oh mother, I am still your little son!
Father, Oh father, I love thee till I am done! ........................................................................
A BIG NOTICE BOARD:
*Your attention please: Just take a break! Now READ part 1 to make your reading wholesome. PART 2 of the poem
Oh, FATHER! - FEEL MY Untold LOVE! (Part-1)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jacqui Broad 28 November 2011

Part 2 really compliments part 1. Parents really do sacriface a lot for their children. Great poem of undying love! In this world where we cannot be sure of many things, we can always be sure of parents' love.

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Harindhar Reddy 21 May 2020

Thank you my friend for your amazing review on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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Vipins Puthooran 29 October 2011

I cannot count the endless things my father has given to me, , , another great poem, , I love your great emotions for your father! ! ! only a few great son can do like this! ! ! 10++

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Harindhar Reddy 21 May 2020

Thank you for a lovely comments on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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Vipins Puthooran 29 October 2011

I cannot count the endless things my father has given to me, , , another great poem, , I love your great emotions for your father! ! ! only a few great son can do like this! ! ! 10++

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Harindhar Reddy

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Haliya, Hyderabad, India
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