Oh Air Poem by Shubham Koul

Oh Air

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You haven't, haven't you gone,
to the top of Himalaya?
Or you haven't, haven't you stayed,
at the scorching plains of Sahara?

I want to be like you, oh air,
that is light, has no color or fear.
That keeps everyone alive,
no matter what is their size.

Traveling whole across the earth,
worrying about nothing neither death nor even dirt.
Checking each and every place, you air;
where no one has reached you reach there.

Whether it is sunny day or wintery night,
you never-ever change your mind.
In the end I would only like to say, 'oh air,
I want to be like you dear.'

Friday, March 2, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sankaran Ayya 14 April 2012

Air beautiful pleasant air touches Himalaya and Heart alike You are a good poet Shubham Write more --KAVIN CHARALAN

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Bimal Koul 10 April 2012

wow...a good write...excellent! !

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Shanky Fanky 02 March 2012

amazing....beautiful description of air and its comparison with life...... :)

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