Off Ramp Poem by Ben Partenay
Off Ramp
the wrecking ball sun
swung out towards the west,
and I raced it on the highway
window open, radio on,
wind whipping
past hair and eyes and a desperate grin
that held no countenance,
while the bitter lights
From the city behind, shone
with a little less sparkle,
a little less welcoming, a little
more of a “what could you
have possibly hoped for? ”
and there it is, the exit,
that little blue bird, that little ray
of light that never quite leaves, just hides,
and begs to escape,
and I wonder,
will we ever escape
Such a well done poem. I really like the imagery and the wrecking ball sun really captured my attention and kept me reading.
that little blue bird, that little ray of light that never quite leaves, just hides, Congrats for being chosen for the day!
I liked this write. Great imagery, one could feel, see, hear what was going on in the verses. Gets better the more you read it. Excellently written poem. Great interpretation. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
Begs to escape and I wonder, will we ever escape Nice write. Congrats on member POD.
Congrats for the honours of POTD...........Wonderful poem.10++
I was captured by the first two lines, then stayed for the ride. Very imaginative and vivid piece. Well done, and congratulations!
Very thought provoking and well done. Congratulations on poem of the day.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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