** Of Own God ** Poem by Dr subhendu kar

** Of Own God **

Rating: 3.3


Of own God

what a gleams of light blesses soul
where I am speechless by glimpse
heart rejoices reaching moon top
passion splashes onshore in ecstasy

as dancing waves of ocean as eternal
silhouette prolongs onto motley horizon
yet nonplussed by wordless promise grin
lest it may emerge from the blue of sea

eyes never riles up by elysian blue
silence of quest awaits nifty vastness
wading seamless across upstream
extending its wings ages and eons


desire delves bliss from deep within
breath of mystery persists in continuum
nigger of pain mingles in air westerly
to touch upon own god yet unknown

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Goge 23 October 2008

...eyes never riles up by elysian blue silence of quest awaits nifty vastness wading seamless across upstream extending its wings ages and eons... ....................................................... breath of mystery persists in continuum... ........................................................ Fine poems... 10............

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Anjali Sinha 23 October 2008

a beautiful poem 'where I am speechless by the glimpse' ++10 regards anju

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Sarwar Chowdhury 27 October 2008

Your thoughtful composition always attract me. this one a fine philosophical expression! 10+++++

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Seema Chowdhury 27 October 2008

wordless promise.... speechless grin.... lovely phrases and very catchy. i really enjoyed both your poems today. thanks

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Tesla Loy 28 October 2008

Lovely lyricism. Very expressive.

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Fiona Davidson 08 November 2008

Just beautiful..thank you for sharing...

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Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid 05 November 2008

A poem which can 'happen' anywhere in this cosmos. Gives a feeling of solitary turbulence! Very rythmic and eloquent. Thank you for giving joy of the soul.

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Herod 04 November 2008

eloquent and beautiful

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Cassie Wheathers 03 November 2008

God, that is beautiful, i think all of us can learn something form you and your style.

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<font color =fusha>Amy 03 November 2008

you have written so many, i dont know how you find so much inspiration but it's great nice one :)

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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