Of My Valentine Flower Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Of My Valentine Flower



These rosy petals,
fresh and fragrant once,
of my Valentine's flower
now look withered
I keep them upon
the platter of my heart-
my cherished treasure-
the feelings of love,
the wind, water, and the fire
associated with them,
whither would they leave?
beyond these four walls,
where they reverberate-

My dear, you reside there
forever reared
in my memories revere

12th February 2010

Friday, February 12, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: romance,love,valentine
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Krishnarasa Seshadri 12 February 2010

Its such a beautiful poem sir.....so touching! :)

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Kranthi Pothineni 13 February 2010

Very nice. Each line is moving, moved my deep.10.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 13 February 2010

A LOVELY VALENTINE POEM...IT REVERBERATES LOVE

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Indira Renganathan 15 February 2010

Simple...yet with contentful depth...beautifully presented....a memorable valentine flower....thank you

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Deependra Kumar Jha 15 February 2010

Indeed beautiful... wonderful expressions of love... a touching write. Excellent as usual.

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Konstantin Filipov 17 May 2010

A really nice poem, love is amazing and the way you express it is amazing, thanks for sharing

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Eyan Desir 14 March 2010

Nice flow nice blending words 10s

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Sumita Datta 23 February 2010

Lovely Kesavji... Truly well written simple but rich piece of work.

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Rani Turton 23 February 2010

Delicately tender, this Valentine flower.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 21 February 2010

Deathless entity of 'Perfect Love'...I'll not add the cliched say why only V Day [just 1 day] for Love... Its a relentless flow of Bliss without greed of Hiss...wat in vogue today... Perfect Ten [PT] Love is rare and scare... And you've sculpted that PT 10 from feelings Ms. Nivedita UK

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