indira babbellapati

Rookie - 71 Points (visakhapatnam, india)

Of Mars - Poem by indira babbellapati

Undying spirit of
Ancient human adventure
Man's mission to Mars

Sowing seeds of
Human life on outer planet
Man's mission to Mars

Taming the cosmos
Mark of man's intelligence
Foot-prints on Mars

Fiery Mars
Sparkling red on dark skies
O, my War Lord!

Blood-shot Mars
Brought home Venus
Prized victor!

Masculine Mars
Mellowed in my hands
Moon throbbed


Comments about Of Mars by indira babbellapati

  • Veteran Poet - 1,325 Points Shahzia Batool (5/19/2013 11:53:00 PM)

    Less about Mars and more about Man's quest, ambitions, and...what he is doing to his own species! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 39,822 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (5/18/2013 2:15:00 AM)

    man in trap like wax melt bravery or rowdiness to loosing existence....nice poem with metaphor and imagery strong (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,068 Points Kanav Justa (5/18/2013 1:45:00 AM)

    nice way you write your poems, , , (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 16, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 16, 2013


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