indira babbellapati

Rookie - 97 Points (visakhapatnam, india)

Of Mars - Poem by indira babbellapati

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Undying spirit of
Ancient human adventure
Man's mission to Mars

Sowing seeds of
Human life on outer planet
Man's mission to Mars

Taming the cosmos
Mark of man's intelligence
Foot-prints on Mars

Fiery Mars
Sparkling red on dark skies
O, my War Lord!

Blood-shot Mars
Brought home Venus
Prized victor!

Masculine Mars
Mellowed in my hands
Moon throbbed


Comments about Of Mars by indira babbellapati

  • Shahzia Batool (5/19/2013 11:53:00 PM)


    Less about Mars and more about Man's quest, ambitions, and...what he is doing to his own species! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (5/18/2013 2:15:00 AM)


    man in trap like wax melt bravery or rowdiness to loosing existence....nice poem with metaphor and imagery strong (Report) Reply

  • Kanav Justa (5/18/2013 1:45:00 AM)


    nice way you write your poems, , , (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 16, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 16, 2013


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