Of Death Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s

Of Death

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What does a death consist
And who are the one who insist
It has air, water and life
A child, children and wife.

Death appears before you think
Forcing you to accept another body
But what exactly happens is
Life is detached from the unreal things.

Death returns your balances
Eventually burns the desires
Death makes you walk and run
When you are on a sleep.

Death has the living
A living before it arrives
So, what does it consist
It consists body, flesh and few years.

Of Death
Friday, November 18, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Luz Hanaii 19 November 2011

An excellent philosophical write...thanks for sharing.

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Oreoluwa Temmy 22 November 2011

nice poem keep it up

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Matt Mooney 02 December 2011

A concept of death that is new to me and I find it interesting.The poem in itself is just right in it's structure and length for the theme.10.

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Vipins Puthooran 28 December 2011

Life and death are the unchangeable gift of man! ! A good poem! !

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Dead Leaf 18 November 2011

nice...i like it..............

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Tony Sampson 21 January 2014

Even in a leaf that falls from a tree, it is a kind of death certain to the tree but the manner of that kind of death can nourish the ground where the roots of the tree provides it with the growth of its kind of life. Redwood trees can grow for hundreds of years. They are the tallest trees in all the world.

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Connor Whyte 10 July 2012

Death keeps us on edge and on constant alert making us more cautious of what is going on. I find beauty in this as I find beauty in death it is both scary but yet sometimes inviting, Interesting view on death, Good job!

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Samra Haq 08 July 2012

Your poem is very nice. But the topic of your poem was quite sad. And its true that every body has die one day and nobody knows that when and where. Your poem is based upon philosophical theory. Thanks for sharing.

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Very well written... Intresting suject as well

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Anita Sehgal 26 May 2012

Death has a strange fascination! well written.

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