abhimanyu kumar.s

Rookie - 56 Points (31.12.1988 / venkatgiri kota)

Of Death


What does a death consist
And who are the one who insist
It has air, water and life
A child, children and wife.

Death appears before you think
Forcing you to accept another body
But what exactly happens is
Life is detached from the unreal things.

Death returns your balances
Eventually burns the desires
Death makes you walk and run
When you are on a sleep.

Death has the living
A living before it arrives
So, what does it consist
It consists body, flesh and few years.

Submitted: Friday, November 18, 2011
Edited: Friday, November 18, 2011

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  • Rookie - 20 Points Tony Sampson (1/21/2014 7:50:00 AM)

    Even in a leaf that falls from a tree, it is a kind of death certain to the tree but the manner of that kind of death can nourish the ground where the roots of the tree provides it with the growth of its kind of life. Redwood trees can grow for hundreds of years. They are the tallest trees in all the world. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 6 Points Connor Whyte (7/10/2012 2:08:00 AM)

    Death keeps us on edge and on constant alert making us more cautious of what is going on. I find beauty in this as I find beauty in death it is both scary but yet sometimes inviting, Interesting view on death, Good job! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Samra Haq (7/8/2012 11:47:00 AM)

    Your poem is very nice. But the topic of your poem was quite sad. And its true that every body has die one day and nobody knows that when and where. Your poem is based upon philosophical theory. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 58 Points Matt Mooney (12/2/2011 11:02:00 AM)

    A concept of death that is new to me and I find it interesting.The poem in itself is just right in it's structure and length for the theme.10. (Report) Reply

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