Odie Poem by Twiggy C. Tubercio

Odie



perfection at its worst
as her stone cold eyes freeze me like a picture
all these thoughts are up in the air
hanging by that pink rag
the most beautiful smile giving that 'butterfly feel'
proof that i can love again
but the girl that showed me another love
will probably never see me again
she came like an angel
in the worst of times
and left by storm
when the tide got high
everywhere i look
i see her
shes so far away
yet she consistently finds herself in front of me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 10 August 2009

I have felt those stone cold eyes. It's very interesting the way you weave back and forth came like an angel and left by storm so far away yet in front of me

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