October Poem by Nosheen Irfan

October

Rating: 5.0


There's change in the air
Crisp to the touch
Dry to the skin
Something is there: a weight
Like a love not declared
Like a letter not dispatched
Some change is happening
In hushed tones
In unstressed syllables
Leaves are set to fall
Without regret or grievance
What is happening?
Eyes see goodbyes
Heart sees new beginnings.

October
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 03 October 2021

This poem mesmerizes me.5 Stars full. Amazing poem!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 October 2021

A vivid depiction of change embellished with great images. Beautifully written.

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Anil Kumar Panda 03 October 2021

Beautiful write. Thanks for sharing.

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Bharati Nayak 03 October 2021

Something is there: a weight Like a love not declared Like a letter not dispatched Some change is happening In hushed tones In unstressed syllables Leaves are set to fall---Powerful expression of a softer emotion--

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 October 2021

Leaves are set to fall.... hushed tones... unstressed syllables.... beautifully placed at their respective positions. A fantastic poem!

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Cowboy Ron Williams 01 November 2021

A wonderful poem full of mystery!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 October 2021

New beginnings in October, very impressivekly worded.5 Stars full for this sterling poem. To my Favourites!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 04 October 2021

Thank you dear Nosheen for this lovely poem with a beautiful image. Hundred stars!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 04 October 2021

A marvellous poem from a marvellous Poetess makes the heart sing with joy.

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Bharati Nayak 03 October 2021

Eyes see goodbyes Heart sees new beginnings.---What a marvelous closing lines!

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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