Ocean's Love Poem by Ruma Chaudhuri

Ocean's Love

Rating: 4.8


You woke up with smiling face
When she was holding you
You blushed with golden red
She was sparkling and laughing too.

I saw you, dazzling sun,
When you were looking on her
She was dancing with the waves
And all around the golden rays scattered.


Covered with a golden veil
She has been groomed as a new bride
Look at her reddish face

Bliss of love, love with delight.

Friday, March 28, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 05 May 2014

A nice imagery of a golden beaming sun, afloat the curly waves of an ocean, held on her bosom in love. An absorbing thought. I have a poem with a similar title (Ocean Of Love) on a different theme though. If you have time, please read it and be kind to say a word or two.

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Akhtar Jawad 01 May 2014

That's like a good baby, nice poem.

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