! ! Ocean Of Verse Part Ii! Poem by Rema Prasanaa

! ! Ocean Of Verse Part Ii!

Rating: 3.3


Ocean I do not want
to fight a battle on
your mighty realm,
no swords in my hands
to flash a spark
at your glowing crown
I am not a gladiator to
fire at you or wage a
war on your domain
I want to light only stars
luminous and crystalline
camphor for incessant fragrance
I want to swing on your
mesmerizing passion
bless me with kindness
to radiate a rhythm that pleases
souls, bless me on my head
I want to praise your tidal waves
allow me to float my little canoe




© Rema Prasanna
July 30,2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vidyadhar Durgekar 31 July 2008

The quality of your imagery is charmingly scintilating which takes the reader like surfing on waves I am impressed my 10

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Ramesh T A 12 August 2008

Certainly waves of ocean bless you with its rhythm of simple harmonic motion like the heart pulse in your verse too!

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Kesav Easwaran 06 August 2008

well, the no moon day is over...the mind ocean calming down...let creative thinking wax up...10

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Onelia Avelar 03 August 2008

The poetry seems to be so important and powerful factor in your life, you sound like an islander living on a small island, surrounded by Ocean of verses...lucky you!

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Sathyanarayana M V S 03 August 2008

Very soothing, pleasant verse 10 sathya narayana

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Raj Nandy 31 July 2008

Reema, your both the parts are an excellent prayer and should become part of all our school syllabus. Thanks. -Raj Nandy

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