Ocean Poem by Taylor S

Ocean

Rating: 5.0


A depth of fantoms
Unknown
With life unable to be
Seen
A vast canvas with colors not made by
Man
A reflection of things
Above
A peice of life just waiting to be
Seen

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ronny Self 19 May 2009

I was impressed about how much you managed to portray in such few words. A good write. One thing though: you misspelled 'be' in the third line. A typo, I'm sure, but one that still detracts from the poem. Make sure to fix it, and it will appear even better. Write on. Ronny

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Delicate Heart 19 May 2009

very nice imagery , you become traveler whilst reading, very tender poem.

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