Aftab Alam

Gold Star - 39,733 Points (15 th April 1967 / , , RANCHI,)

Oblivion - Poem by Aftab Alam

I am the one,
Who is none?
Isn’t it a fun?

What are you?
We both have same fate,
Please love Earth, don’t hate

Rich or poor, black and white,
King or beggar
Dust to dust; am I right?


Then why there is hitch?
Why to fear ditch?
Ready for glitch- glitch –glitch

Before departing,
Correct your defect,
For eternity; act-act-act


Comments about Oblivion by Aftab Alam

  • Gold Star - 7,512 Points Kelly Kurt (4/6/2015 2:52:00 AM)

    Good advice, Aftab. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 96 Points Ruby Mostazir (3/25/2015 9:20:00 AM)

    nice :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,535 Points Edward Kofi Louis (3/18/2015 11:43:00 AM)

    Nice piece of work. Yes, we should love the earth and, put things right.

    E.K.L. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 17, 2015



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