Nursery Rhyme Poem by prasanna kumari

Nursery Rhyme

Rating: 5.0


People on my left and right
Laughing with all mirth and might
Leave in me a life delight
Consoling my heart in tight
Helping me with soaring height
Fill in me all cooling sight

Staring at those city light
A wonder thought does give me fright
Where is our inner light
Have we spilled and made it slight
Filling dark inside is blight
Leaving us with less insight
Making daily life in plight

Why should we all start a fight
When friendship is burning bright
We need not be full of fright
War will end with peace upright
Don’t be afraid of twilight
Setting Sun will bring us light
We will go and fly a kite
Well before the dark and night

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 30 September 2006

A rhyme you set out Tto compose, and a rhyme is what you so composed.... Commendably structured and free-flowing....a fine write, Prasanna... '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 25 October 2008

I have to agree with my friend, Tara...this is a fine rhymer, indeed....Solid Penning, Prasanna. ___ FjR ****

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Risha : Ahmed 01 January 2008

Prasanna aunty....This one is a lovely poem and what great rhyming. Loved it.

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June30 Tara 01 February 2007

It’s a fabulous poem….and what a great rhyming… love, Tara

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Preeti - is here! 05 October 2006

The most striking thing about the poem is the rhyme, brilliant! and the message was great too. Preets

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Risha : Ahmed 30 September 2006

This is such a wonderful poem. You are great at rhyming too. Please add me as your fan.

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