Now That You'E Gone Poem by 3MI LIANA

Now That You'E Gone

Rating: 2.5


now that you're gone
i feel as if my path has become clear
now that you're gone
i feel that i can finally breathe
now that you're gone
i can spread my wings and fly
now that you're gone
my world has entirely changed
now that you're gone
i finally realized that i never needed you here
and that you were only in my way

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Delicate Heart 18 April 2009

it 's amazing it may takes the breath away with it delicacy

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~*adriana*~ ~*Salazar*~ 18 April 2009

very optimistic and refreshing. It is obvious that you put alot of effot and heart in such a poem. :)

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OuSs@Ma Samouna 19 April 2009

very nice.... keep up the good work 10/10 thanks for sharing.

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Subroto Chatterjee 04 May 2009

Ah, finally you've grown up...all of us have passed through this stage...but you 'poemed' it naturally. And stay calm inside too.... Cheers. Subroto

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natshka danda 29 April 2009

Just keep writing my, friend. You can always revise them when some rhyme strikes you

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Tony Fiona 24 April 2009

that's very good keep it up.

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C. P. Sharma 22 April 2009

Good self expressive poetry. Keep it up. I think my 'Love Affair' can help you a little. CP

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Justice For All 19 April 2009

it was really great keep it up

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