Notice Me Poem by Megan Reily

Notice Me

Rating: 5.0


Where am I going?
Where have I been?
No one takes the time
to understand

Passing through me
Walking by me
No one ever takes a look
To see what they hurt

Their eyes face straight
They keep moving forward
Leaving me in the cold
Watching them go

Don't have much left
Sorry if it’s too much
If someone were to take the time
To notice me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Smith 18 January 2009

Powerful writing Megan, well done and keep going. X

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Janri Gogeshvili 13 January 2009

Aspiration to realize itself... ”There eyes face straight” The interesting...

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LOVEFOOL Aka 13 January 2009

Good stuff thought provoking thanks

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