Nothing Stops Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Nothing Stops
Nothing stops
In natural process
When we face
In stepwise phase
Childhood notoriety
With experience in variety
All comes before eyes
For study with lessons and earnest tries
Most enterprising was youth
Synchronizing fast breast
To settle in life successfully
Togo well with satisfaction hopefully
Life’s inning and journey
Goes well with blessings from almighty
Time comes to caution and hear word” halt”
Life moves steadily without any fault
It is cycle that has to be completed
Old departs and new takes over
Leaves fall down from parent tree
Making a final way to be totally free
It is most feared phase
But stark reality not liked by face
It is time to go back to the origin
From where the life had begun
David Rowden14 minutes ago In some places this poem flows freely in others it bunches up. i liked it's message but the delevery was ineffective. My opionion is probably clouded because i like even stanzas and rhyming in my poetry. My reviews are propably not fair to free verse poets.
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Post Life's different phases.. Philo Francis7 minutes ago The cycle of Life as told by a great Man of poems and rhymes and free verses! Thank you Hasmukh, there's great, deep meaning all thru' this poem. Comment +1 A combination of Rhyming and free verse, unusual