Nothing Remains Poem by Valsa George

Nothing Remains

Rating: 5.0


Nothing Remains
Of a life lived together
When the world, to us, was full of beauty

Nothing remains
Of those lovely evenings,
We rambled along the quiet country paths

Nothing remains of the twilight dusks
We listened to the invisible choir
Singing for us in the descending dark

Nothing remains
Of the whirlwind of love
When we rocked in gyrating motion

Nothing remains
Of those blissful nights
We slept in each other’s warm embrace

Nothing remains
Of the sweat we shed
To make a nest n’ feed our fledglings

Nothing remains
Of our stay in that cottage
Fringed with a quiet flowing river

Nothing remains
Of the time tarried in anticipation
Of our birdies returning to our nest

Nothing remains
Of the times we dreamt
Of magic kingdoms beyond our hills

Nothing remains of those days
When existence was but a lovely dream
And from joy to joy uninterrupted we flew

Nothing remains
As the lid of the coffin shut
And my Love wheeled on a hearse!

How quickly life slid off its track
To immeasurable distances n’ spaces
Landing me in an abyssal pit

How a winter of benumbing snow
Has nudged its way
Into every crack and cranny of my life

Now, I live a phantom under this roof
With awful memories barging in
Like the marauding thieves!

How I search in vain
For those footprints, you have left
In the weed grown paths of my life

How I long to wash away
My grief in a surge of tears
Trickling down my eyes

But Alas!
I cannot cry
My eyes are dry!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The bemoaning of a wife who lost her husband!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pradip Chattopadhyay 06 February 2014

superbly penned there Valsa the gradual change, the shifting hues of colors, coming over human life as it runs the years. you end with a sad note.

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Lyn Paul 06 February 2014

Dear Valsa these words are truly beautiful and how you have moved me. What can I say but thank you for a very special poem to save.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 06 February 2014

When you unleash........Valsa.........every piece becomes a masterpiece.......a very touching poem with intense feelings of love, hope, faith, courage and distress, grief, lament and what not.....very well composed

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 06 February 2014

Past is always a memory. Nothing tangible remains. Memories remain and keep reminding of bygone days and dreams.Memories must carry one through life somehow. Nice poem beautifully written. Thank you.

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Kee Thampi 06 February 2014

a consoling poem touching deep.... Nothing remains of those days When existence was but a lovely dream

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 August 2019

How I search in vain For those footprints, you have left In the weed grown paths of my life How I long to wash away My grief in a surge of tears Trickling down my eyes.....so touching and moving. The cry of inner heart of woman who lost her husband is astutely delineated. Beautiful poem.10

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Akhtar Jawad 06 September 2015

Yes, nothing remains except love.................................10

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Md Asadullah 16 February 2014

So sad, but this is bitter truth of life, Nothing remains but sweet and bitter memories of days gone by : (

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Savita Tyagi 10 February 2014

Once again a gift of a beautiful poem given to us so freely. Loved reading each line. Nothing remains yet all is there somewhere in our thoughts. Thank you so much Valsa for sharing this lovely write.

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Dinesan Madathil 08 February 2014

Nothing remains...... the grieving widow`s reminiscences have a desperate look and she dives flat into the mire of her seclusion and despondency. But she has to search and find Those footprints, he has once left In the weed grown paths of her life left dry As those prints have crushed many a weed down To show the way to his dear not departed till his last breath. Sorry, Madam I could not read this poem till Feb 8.

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