Karen GonzalezVidela


Nothing But Void


In the cold right there
Shaking my feet all bared,
What was going on
Still not known,
Why it happened
Seemed to be all blackened,
But kept going on it did
With such force it did not hid
That to move I had
The wind away from or get mad.
But over again the same
What was going on made me insane.
Why it happened?
Confusion made me saddened.
Kept going on it did,
Moving did not put a lid.
So opened at last the door,
Checked in and only void,
Wind and cold.
Stop the freezing did none
But kept going on, kept going on.
And though nothing but void
Passed by my door,
Awful did feel I
Because it was then when noticed I
That by my door will pass
Always nothing but the void.

Submitted: Friday, June 14, 2013
Edited: Saturday, June 15, 2013
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  • David Harris (6/17/2013 12:20:00 PM)

    Karen, this is such an interesting piece. The looking at things from different angles works well. Keep up the good work.
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