Nothing A Kiss Couldn’t Solve Poem by Alyssa Lynn

Nothing A Kiss Couldn’t Solve

Rating: 5.0


You get me and it feels so right, only catch is its not exactly “love at first sight.” I try I try but I can’t force myself, force myself to love you but you……You know my favorite songs you can keep me laughing all night long. You you give a damn and you like who I am. You, you don’t criticize you simply look me in the eyes and say you “care” and “if you need me I’ll be there “I’m hesitant to know what will come of us, cuz if I said I didn’t think we had potential, maybe I’d fool everybody else, but myself. Cuz we could drive all night while I daydream about some random “boy to hold me tight”. And I know, know there’s things I can’t see. But I don’t know if I could let go of you, pretty sure you wouldn’t want me too. I know I’m most likely wasting your time and there’s always the possibility I could call you “mine”, I’m not sure what’s stopping me. Maybe just a kiss, will clear my mind, will clear things up, and I could leave the rest of the world behind. Just one kiss could help me get this straight to see…..if you could be the boy I should date. But any second I fear I may just disappear, disappear and you won’t even be able to tell I was even here. Any second I could simply vanish without a trace so I can’t help but wonder if it all could be avoided with embrace.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Quin Bland 05 February 2010

You were right, that ending will stay with me for a whiiile. I'll probably go to sleep tonight and ebry night with a smile on my face if I read this poem. I rated it a ten but, to me, it deserves a 15! I'll probably read it another ten times just for fun lol. Hope, potential, and a wavering kiss In The distance growing ever closer to a boy who probably could die happy immediately afterwards, he classic setup for a total 'princess and the dork' fairy tale ending lol. Or, should I say beginning? Fairy tale or not, either way I'll probably keep this poem in high regards for years to come. And I have to say, I'm more than glad that I read this poem, thanx for sharing ;) .

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