Notes From The Night Poem by Eric Cockrell

Notes From The Night

Rating: 5.0


Rilke once said
if he spent all of his life
studying and working
he hoped to
be able to write
four good lines of poetry

think i'll quit writing
grow a big garden,
cut and stack wood
for all who are cold
save as many stray dogs
as i can
spend a lot of time
playing with and listening to
small children
and sit with as many
old people left alone
to die as i can

read Rilke daily,
and drink a lot of
black coffee
and hope like hell
that just before i die
i can write one good line
of poetry
i'd be happy with that!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dead Leaf 20 February 2012

A great poem...really nice

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Vipins Puthooran 19 February 2012

'tis a pure poem/// 10

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Declan O Reilly 09 September 2011

You already have Eric. I love the flow of this, the sincerity is ingrained in it. An honest poem from a wise poet.10 out of 10.

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Smoky Hoss 09 September 2011

Pardner, here you have most certainly wrote many good lines of poetry (not to mention all the great ones in several other poems of yours!): and I must say this poem strikes deep, I enjoy R. M. Rilke very much also, and just as much so I always enjoy your work, keep writing Eric, I'm certain you have very many more good lines waiting to 'speak'.

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