Rilke once said
if he spent all of his life
studying and working
he hoped to
be able to write
four good lines of poetry
think i'll quit writing
grow a big garden,
cut and stack wood
for all who are cold
save as many stray dogs
as i can
spend a lot of time
playing with and listening to
small children
and sit with as many
old people left alone
to die as i can
read Rilke daily,
and drink a lot of
black coffee
and hope like hell
that just before i die
i can write one good line
of poetry
i'd be happy with that!
You already have Eric. I love the flow of this, the sincerity is ingrained in it. An honest poem from a wise poet.10 out of 10.
Pardner, here you have most certainly wrote many good lines of poetry (not to mention all the great ones in several other poems of yours!): and I must say this poem strikes deep, I enjoy R. M. Rilke very much also, and just as much so I always enjoy your work, keep writing Eric, I'm certain you have very many more good lines waiting to 'speak'.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A great poem...really nice