Notes For Leaving Poem by Sonya Florentino

Wow; you are so inspiring. Notes for Leaving is a killer title. I love the bit about don't wake me from my dream (which might be wonderful who knows) just to lie to me as you are on your way out of my life forever. Love that a song inspired this gem! ! (smile)

tha concluding para is very touching, sonya.....

This is a refreshing piece Sonya all the more since it has been inspired by Stevie Wonder's song.....I agree with Patti, the title is brilliant...10+++++++++

'If you ever leave Leave me in the night Don’t interrupt a dream To tell me lies'... good poem...expresses a lot of truth in response to lies...the quoted lines i liked most...thanks...10

the 3rd stanza is very interesting. i think the liar is the coward...a 10+

This is a very interesting title for a poem. It reminded me of 'Dear John, how I hate to write...... It is a coward's way out really, but if things are absolutely impossible with no communication, at least it can serve a purpose. You have written it beautifully bringing in the seasons and I loved it all. 10 Karin

There is definitely the need for a book on 'The Etiquette of Abandonment' - and your Notes for Leaving would have pride of place! S :)

I just love the title! The inspiration born by the song is quite justified in your lines. A very lovely poem, thanks for sharing, Sonya. Yelena M.