Notes Poem by Liliana EL.

Notes



My need to fill the absence of you has seen me take to the pens and notebooks.
How would I act if I were with you?
Jumping and twirling in bursting joy and glee?
Perhaps standing quiet and tearing for the bliss I perceive.
I know how to tell you and what to say.
I'm not at a loss of words but rather caught in the wave of time constantly wrestling me.
My words are deep.
They can be powerful and strong.
But what I need is time with you.
Maybe even a hug?

I love you, but at this point, what are words but just my ramblings? I've often decided to leave it at 'I love you.
I love you because you are amazing. Really amazing.'

The power of love is with me everyday.
To put my experiences with and feelings for you could possibly take a decade.
To put these into words would be a great and powerful record that would prove, to generations to come, my love for you and the immense influence you have been for me.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Liliana ~el(11/4/2013 5: 59: 00 PM) Thank you, Mutuleanu, so much for inspiring me to reflect and spill these words! ~

'The miles between us
Have made me a poet
Otherwise, in your presence,
I´m silent as a feather.

I love you
But I don`t know how to say it,
It seems that words
Lack what`s necessary.

The power of my love
Lies only in my heart,
So to put it into words...'
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vlad Mutuleanu 05 November 2013

Wow! Thank you. I didn`t know you shared this. You really are amazing!

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