Note. Poem by Dónall Dempsey

Note.

Rating: 5.0


The note reads:
“Weds. Dec.29th
9.30 a.m.”

The note
falls from the wallet

falling from the hand
of the man.

The heart attack
stops the traffic

as the light goes green.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nancy Ames 02 March 2008

This is very well done - dramatic, concise and makes its point effectively. It reminds me of a scene on T.V. too - really writing for today.

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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