sekharan pookkat


Not Settled So Far


Eyes closed in delight
Mind opened in doubt
Debt settled in past
Fragrance spread in galore.

Garland danced
Among bushes
Heart gazed for
Gentry touch.

Emotions converged into fury
And the poet shouted with gun
Where is he?
He has gone at last.

He was at her sight
Sat aside her right
Right below her knee
Not settled so far.

Submitted: Friday, August 16, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, August 21, 2013

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  • Gold Star - 7,260 Points Neela Nath (10/8/2013 9:10:00 PM)

    I am just speechless.A vivid pen-picture.It's like Joydev's Geetgobindam- - - Dehi podo-pallava-mudaram! But not settled, because, there's confusion, dubiousness.Fab.10+++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 211 Points Beach Girl (8/19/2013 4:03:00 PM)

    Wow! Not sure what's going on in this poem Sekharan, but it's awesome! Poets shouting with guns, sounds a little scary lol. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Zandile Zoya (8/19/2013 1:38:00 AM)

    He was at her sight
    Sat aside her right
    Right below her knee
    Not settled so far...
    i like! ! ! :) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,147 Points Thomas A Robinson (8/17/2013 6:22:00 PM)

    Hmmm, poets and guns do not go well together.
    Guns are much too emotional and often go off with a bang.
    And they cannot be trusted often saying they are unloaded or the safety is on.
    Poets on the other hand are observers in their right.
    Often just innocent bystanders in the middle of a fight.
    But do not be worried they often come through unscathed.
    The poet and his gun often talking all about someone and his death. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (8/17/2013 10:25:00 AM)

    brilliant poem or should i say a perfect wholesome story with nothing left to disappoint....bravo sir (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (8/17/2013 10:05:00 AM)

    settling scores an be tricky watch that gun it might go off. trick lines makes the poem interesting (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 267 Points David Wood (8/16/2013 1:56:00 PM)

    A lovely poem I enjoyed reading. I invite you now to read some of mine. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 7,536 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/16/2013 1:51:00 PM)

    It seems scores not yet settled, that too a poet shouted with as powerful as gun. Very beautiful poem.Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

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