! ! Not One Artificial Painted Heart! Poem by Rema Prasanaa

! ! Not One Artificial Painted Heart!

Rating: 3.3


A smile embraces
heart and soul
I need to hold aside on a
day of disdain
In a way to impound
isolated feelings of one
docile elfin dream

Hearts are overhauled
when clogged up
thru an élan bypass
painless pain needles impart
plaques of mind
repress innermost
Mind cannot be bypassed
on needle points

Black dot leaves
stains for ever
white flawless on
all surfaces
at one remorseful end
white conceals dark
like the gleam of a lantern
reflects no fade
no blend on it to
clog and block

Artificial painted hearts
isolate feelings
isolate love
isolate kindness
isolate humanity
And crush mind
on a dark base
one fatal error
no escape.....

A smile embraces heart
and soul I need...
not from artificial
painted hearts
but from a pure heart
where soul can be
percieved from within

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vidyadhar Durgekar 08 August 2008

soul speaks when heart cannot another good one..............my 10

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Saint Cynosure 04 August 2008

Rema for you to improve on the passion, that you at this time know so well how to express would be scary, if it was not so beautiful...

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Tai Chi Italy 04 August 2008

Had to sign back in for this on Rema! Very true, artificial hearts can never paint a lasting smile. Have a real smile from Tai

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