Not Of This World Poem by Richard Wlodarski

Not Of This World

Rating: 5.0


I do think
I am not
Of this world
I cannot
Damn conform
To screwy restrictions
I try try try
And die die die
What the hell
Why not die?
'cause I now live
Wanna so live
Yet, death's not far

Tuesday, August 9, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: lessons of life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Kerouac Series
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 09 August 2022

Both poems are Excellent

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Richard Wlodarski 09 August 2022

THX so very much, LeeAnn!

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Kevin Patrick 01 April 2024

Every word in this poem is 100% relatable, it is hard to mask ourselves the way others want us to, in order to survive. The last line just hit home that mortality is its own isolation. God be with you Richard so that you my continue your tasks of providing us these gems.

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Richard Wlodarski 06 April 2024

You've left me speechless, Kevin! So many many THX to you for your very insightful commentary! And for your last line...that means the world to me!

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Sandra Feldman 11 August 2022

Glad to see, dear Richard that things are better now. Your excellent poet-person deserves the best!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 11 August 2022

Dear Richard, a poem that expresses deep 'angst' of life and death. Very beautifully penned.......Top score

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Richard Wlodarski 11 August 2022

Receiving such a very positive appraisal of this poem from one of the highest esteemed poets is indeed a great honour. And especially so much more meaningful because the poem is part of my first book in The Kerouac Project. So many THX, Geeta!

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Anil Kumar Panda 10 August 2022

Sometimes it is very difficult to face the ugly situations and you feel low and depressed. Such thoughts come into mind. Nice expression of frustration. Loved the ink.

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Richard Wlodarski 10 August 2022

Very grateful for your visit, comments and loving of my poem, Poet Panda!

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Richard Wlodarski 10 August 2022

Thank you very much, Lorraine Black for adding my poem to your favourites!

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