Not Now, As Then Poem by Jacqui Thewless

Not Now, As Then



Not now, in August nights - as when
I walked wide sands alone,
where sea pulls shore,
and wished for him who’d paused with me
to hear this hush below the Perseids -
I’d hide from this common moon

whose light floods sparks that streak black skies again...

Now no sad oceanic trails
remind this empty hand of his-in-mine,
nor leaving or oncoming tides
of turning waves endow what's lost or spent.
I could not wish for more -
not now, as then.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Martin O'Neill 20 February 2012

Jaqui this is so bittersweet it left me almost breathless with the emotion of it. I hav eneglected your poetry of late, my fault, my loss, apologies.

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Unwritten Soul 22 September 2011

Oh this is so touching...the start and the end echoes equally in same beauty...the nice feeling still linger after reading this_Unwritten Soul

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