Not For Long Poem by Geetima Baruah Sarma

Not For Long

Rating: 4.5


Bad days do not last long,
One should have patience,
To overcome them all.

As the day ends,
Darkness rules all over,
But not for long.

With the change of seasons,
Winter brings about chill,
But not for long.

Trees shed off leaves,
Appear like dead trees,
But not for long.

Hurdles emerge in life,
Rays of hope seem shadowed,
But never for long.


[Published in ‘Buzzle’ on 8 August 2013]

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Tabatabaei 13 August 2013

A good optimistic poem. It wiil be very nice of you if you read and comment on my poem titled Ecstasy. Thanks.

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Leslie Philibert 13 August 2013

Nice write, has the feeling of a collection of haikus.

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 07 October 2013

The rhymes are so beautiful, it's like reading a song. Life's hope in every strife.

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Khairul Ahsan 18 September 2013

A sweet, beautiful poem with positive thoughts. It's like a ray of light that removes darkness of despair and brings brightness of hope. Very well written,10/10!

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Douglas Scotney 13 August 2013

life's too short, Geetima

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Vivek Tiwari 13 August 2013

Absolutely! The immense dark is the sign of recent morning! All the objects including life have two phases and both come alternative.

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Gajanan Mishra 13 August 2013

darkness rules over but not for long. good write.

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