Eloida Capuno

Not A Shield But A Sword - Poem by Eloida Capuno

My fragile soul needed
to take refuge in the
shield of your love

i was hoping to find
but i was pierced
by a sword

Comments about Not A Shield But A Sword by Eloida Capuno

  • Gold Star - 10,003 Points Khairul Ahsan (6/29/2013 12:38:00 PM)

    Very powerful expression. My sympathies with you, as well as high praises for this beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 14 Points Alice -praises-''yhvh'' (6/29/2013 12:21:00 PM)

    Dear Eloida, a short but powerful poem. I enjoyed it. Alice (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 29, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 25, 2013

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