Not A Shield But A Sword Poem by Eloida Capuno

Not A Shield But A Sword

Rating: 5.0


My fragile soul needed
to take refuge in the
shield of your love

i was hoping to find
comfort
but i was pierced
by a sword

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 29 June 2013

Very powerful expression. My sympathies with you, as well as high praises for this beautiful poem.

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Dear Eloida, a short but powerful poem. I enjoyed it. Alice

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