Nostalgia Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

Nostalgia

Rating: 5.0


These hands
Are just the illusion
Of the wings…

I can’t fly
Anywhere…
Now, it's no doubt.

My blazing kingdom
Has melted
In the sky.


He Has nailed me,
To the ground
With nostalgia...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 27 May 2009

'He Has nailed me, To the ground With nostalgia...' O the excellent lines if I could write! So lucid and so deep! ! 10+++

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Kesav Easwaran 02 June 2009

you beautifully weave in the idea inside your mind...yes; illusions are our only wings...thanks Tsira...10

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THW LAST THREE LINES FINISHED THE POEM VERY WELL......10

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Siddharth Singh 24 July 2009

intriguing poem, very well written.

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Subroto Chatterjee 13 August 2009

Nostalgia should make one soar too...Experienced that before? ? Cheers. Subroto

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Romeo Della Valle 01 May 2011

An excellent and well crafted write! A well deserved 10+++ Thanks for inspiring me and the whole world! Thanks also for sharing, Love and Peace for always1...

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Bert Bell 23 October 2010

What a marvelous poem you have written here, Tsira. Very lovely indeed.10+

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Nimal Dunuhinga 18 October 2010

Lol! You write beautifully Tsira! And I see you fly like a butterfly to a certain extent!

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Raju Baruah 24 April 2010

These hands Are just the illusion Of the wings… Magnificent writing...Your words embrace your feelings so profoundly...10+++

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Mukesh Raval 13 February 2010

wow, tsira, you play magic with the words....the last line is mesmerizing.

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